Friday, 20 November 2015

Rapid Rain

Being violent out there
As violent as it can be
People struggling for a shelter everywhere
As far as the eye can see.

All the mountains have disappeared
Nothing left in the scenic view;
Getting wet outside with my peers
As my umbrella flew.

All the umbrellas have overturned,
A havoc created by everyone.
Everyone has themselves with the rain, burned
A stormy rain has left a stun.

Damp and marshy is the ground,
The rain is going on rapid.
The pitter-patter is disabling me to hear any sound,
Can't even hear anyone with the ears of a rabbit.

Should I call it perfect or misfortune?
Is it the bliss of nature or a sign of a typhoon?
Slowly the roar increases and also turns into a croon;
But when it ruins lives, is it then a curse or a boon?
-Chinmayee Kulkarni

11 comments:

  1. Awsum.... I love it....

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  2. I loved ur poem.... Awsum..

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  3. You are an awsome writer...!!

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  4. 'tis good. Do pen more jingly ones..

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    1. Follow this blog, I'm gonna upload more like this

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  6. Thanks for using the pic which i clicked :) :)

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    1. That picture was really beautiful..Thanks to you for adding flavour to my poem

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